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an unedited photo.. I have big problems with the edit of my pictures.. I do not know if it's the new monitors.. the Spyder.. or the new camera..
No matter what I do, I do not like..

edit: Added watermark because it was stolen in the first 5 hours three times...
edit 2: I will tell the story of the picture in a journal when I find the time!



Watch me for more o.O
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:iconsirsavage:
It would be nearly impossible to get a better action shot of these wolves. There was either a lot of luck or careful planning or both. No matter which, it is a job well done.

It is mentioned in the photo's description that it has not been edited. Some edits to focus attention more on the three airborne wolves would be an improvement. The wolf down in front is looking directly at the action, so he helps focus attention on it. But the wolf in the back is focused on something else, and it ever so slightly distracts the viewer from what should be the focus of the photo.

It is unclear what cropping if any has been done to the photo. But perhaps cropping the picture down to just the three entangled wolves and the top (head and back) of the wolf beneath them would narrow the focus of this amazing action shot to include only amazing action.

I really enjoy your work here and hope my review is helpful in at least some small way! : )
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I have to agree with almost everything SirSavage said. However, if you decide to crop I would suggest you go from the original bottom of the photo all the way to the top. Only cropping out the wolf who is leaving the shot. If you kept the picture itself tall and narrow it would echo the tall narrow shape made by the three airborne wolves. The shape is further anchored by the almost tripod shape made by the standing wolf. Taken together, the standing wolf and the three others make a tall narrow triangle ( roughly, of course) which is a very visually pleasing shape.

Over all, it's an amazing shot. You should be very pleased with it.
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srrrg Featured By Owner 4 days ago
pure.
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:iconsethblizzard:
SethBlizzard Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Student
That is an excellent capture, the power of the jump and their interaction is very well timed.
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:iconfinikku:
Finikku Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ou vauh, fine!
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:icondjkb:
djkb Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013   Photographer
Thanks :)
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:icongratteloup:
gratteloup Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013
OOooh...Incredible sporting shot!!!

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:icondjkb:
djkb Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013   Photographer
Thanks :)
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:iconexplicitstudios:
ExplicitStudios Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Student Photographer
amazing!
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:icondjkb:
djkb Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013   Photographer
Thanks :)
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:iconnomjums:
NomJums Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dude (or dudet) this is perfect timing and AWESOME!!!!
I mean what are they jumping for?
And man type of camera do you use?


I love the way almost all the wolves are in the air and when I click it I thought it was fake for some odd reason LOL XD

But this is to awesome and I might use this for my stock for wolves!

Your awesome keep it up! :D
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:icondjkb:
djkb Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013   Photographer
They try to catch a piece of meat ;)

camera and lens:
Canon EOS 5D Mark III + Canon EF 70-200mm 1:2,8L IS II USM
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:iconnomjums:
NomJums Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh I was guessing it was meat LOL XD

Seems like a very good camera! :D


I did not get that at all LOL XD
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:iconscriptorsapiens:
ScriptorSapiens Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
How did you get this shot!? It's perfectly timed, and with no motion blur!! I love it!
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:icondjkb:
djkb Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013   Photographer
With a camera :P
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:iconscriptorsapiens:
ScriptorSapiens Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
Thanks sass master. :) Very nice.
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:iconkreepingspawn:
KreepingSpawn Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Awesome action!
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:icondjkb:
djkb Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013   Photographer
:)
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:iconfacusoad:
facusoad Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow! what a great pic!!!
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:icondjkb:
djkb Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013   Photographer
Thanks :)
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:iconfacusoad:
facusoad Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yo're welcome!
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:iconashimbabbar:
ashimbabbar Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
awesome is far too common a word nowadays, so let's call this fantabulous
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:icondjkb:
djkb Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013   Photographer
Thanks :)
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:iconsurehuinel:
Surehuinel Featured By Owner May 27, 2013   General Artist
Feature :icongrin--plz:[link]
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:icondjkb:
djkb Featured By Owner May 28, 2013   Photographer
Thanks :)
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:iconsurehuinel:
Surehuinel Featured By Owner May 28, 2013   General Artist
My pleasure!
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:iconicu8124me:
icu8124me Featured By Owner May 26, 2013
Awesome Work! Couldn't get M.Vick to ref the fights? J/K...Ha...Ha
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:icondjkb:
djkb Featured By Owner May 28, 2013   Photographer
Thanks :)
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:iconcocooue:
Cocooue Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Student Photographer
wow, this is stunning!
I just saw scenes like this in movies. great work!
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:icondjkb:
djkb Featured By Owner May 22, 2013   Photographer
Thanks :)
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:iconcarmeloefa:
Carmeloefa Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
animals in the wild is beautiful.
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:iconstray-wolf-2:
Stray-Wolf-2 Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Professional Photographer
DUD What a shot man well dune :)
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:icondjkb:
djkb Featured By Owner May 16, 2013   Photographer
Thanks :)
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:icongray-hybrid:
Gray-Hybrid Featured By Owner May 16, 2013
Cool photography .
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:icondjkb:
djkb Featured By Owner May 16, 2013   Photographer
Thanks :)
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:iconslavicwolf:
SlavicWolf Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This a great action shot.
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:icondjkb:
djkb Featured By Owner May 15, 2013   Photographer
Thanks :)
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SeaWeedBrain012 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
MJDHBKADFVJHBDFAKVJHBVKFADJHVEFAKUHBUFQOEIUG
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:icondjkb:
djkb Featured By Owner May 15, 2013   Photographer
?! xD
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:iconseaweedbrain012:
SeaWeedBrain012 Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Sorry, I fangirled coz I love wolves! :D
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:icontorealuxuti:
ToreaLuxuti Featured By Owner May 14, 2013
Wow this foto is amazing, looks very strange but good...:D
it will be hard to capture this, or not?
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:icondjkb:
djkb Featured By Owner May 15, 2013   Photographer
depends on the equipment^^
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:icontorealuxuti:
ToreaLuxuti Featured By Owner May 15, 2013
oh yeah :D sure
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:iconcryogenx37:
Cryogenx37 Featured By Owner May 13, 2013
Going for the triple belly pump!
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:icondjkb:
djkb Featured By Owner May 13, 2013   Photographer
:D
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:iconthannouki:
thannouki Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
just epic, it was taklen at the good time ^^ really wow
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:icondjkb:
djkb Featured By Owner May 13, 2013   Photographer
Thanks :)
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:iconmalleni-stock:
Malleni-Stock Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Impressive capture!
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:icondjkb:
djkb Featured By Owner May 13, 2013   Photographer
Thanks :)
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:iconhegephoto:
hegephoto Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
whats goin on in there? it looks cool
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:icondjkb:
djkb Featured By Owner May 13, 2013   Photographer
Thanks :)
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